I overdid it, on the correction, rather irritating of me. It’s your poem after all, of course. I guess the serendipitous part is that by doing so, I got to look at that line of your poem a bit more, and as Peter Goble says, indeed that fragment on its own is lovely. Anyway, yeah. Lemonade out of lemons, thanks PG, and again I am sorryTony!
Absolutely no problem Mary. You certainly didn’t overdo it. I need all the help I can get when it comes to spelling, punctuation and grammar.
Every time I push the send button there is the Gremlin that makes changes to the text…I think that I’m that Gremlin.
I always welcome comments which will help me improve. That’s why I put stuff out there.
I have has some really good advice from others which I know will help me in the long run